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Do you like to read winter stories at this time of year? According to most of the feeds on my social media, my friends and family are deeply buried under blankets of snow trying to stay warm. With wind chills in the negative numbers, it might not be the ideal weather to go ice skating. However, it is the ideal time to write about it, because I can stay close to the fire while looking outside for inspiration. I share a scene from “Spinning Through Time” where a woman from modern day Dallas unexpectedly spends the winter in 1874 Philadelphia:
The single horse had no trouble pulling the sleigh across the hard packed snow on the lane, and Nicholas assured them the pond lay close enough to the road that they wouldn’t have far to walk. Immediately upon arriving at the pond, he gathered enough wood to start a small fire should they get chilled while skating. While Molly helped Amanda put on her skates, Jaci struggled
with her own, swatting aside petticoats and heavy velvet skirts. “It was much
easier in pants and a sweater,” she mumbled under her breath, wondering how on
earth she would ever stand up, much less skate across the frozen pond. “What’s that, Miss?” The ever vigilant Molly lifted her head
from lacing Amanda’s skates. “Never mind. It’s of no consequence.” Jaci stopped in the middle
of knotting the second skate. Dear me, I’m even beginning to talk like them. Her thoughts were immediately diverted when Amanda squealed.
She straightened her skirts carefully around her legs as she watched the child
glide out onto the ice, her cheeks rosy with cold and excitement. For such a
young child, she skated exceptionally well. “Miss Eastman, perhaps you would stay warmer if you got off
that log and moved about.” She glanced up sharply as a shadow crossed her vision. Nicholas,
handsome as always in his greatcoat and wool trousers, extended a hand to her. The
air floated about his head in frozen puffs as he spoke. She wondered when she had fallen in love with him. The words
didn’t surprise her today, even though two days ago she had protested such an
idea. Deep in her heart, she had already known the truth. She shook her head in
wonder. For most of her adult life, she had tried to avoid macho
males who wanted to run her life, and yet here she was, stuck in the wrong
century with just such a man. And the problem? She didn’t seem to mind it. Nicholas had a magnetic personality which drew others to
him, herself included, and his smile was enough to make a girl faint, or swoon,
or whatever they did in 1874. He had a terrific sense of humor, talked to her
intelligently and not in a condescending manner, and seemed to value her as an
individual. Of course, when they argued, it was as violent as the thunderstorms
that shook the earth, but even their fights had sent shivers of excitement
through her. So what’s the problem? She asked herself. Aside from the
fact that she didn’t belong here and didn’t know how long she would stay? She
shook her head to clear it as she allowed him to pull her out onto the ice,
deciding today wasn’t made for worrying. “You’re much more graceful on skates than the back of a
horse,” he teased as he skated in front of her. Her skirts billowed out about her, but she found they didn’t
inhibit her movements like she thought they would. Nicholas was showing off by tipping forward, one foot lifted
behind him in the air. She pushed him, catching him off balance. He wobbled and
fell on his fanny. “Alas, it’s too bad you’re not. Do you always end up on your
as...derriere?” She stood in front of him to judge his reaction. His grin was infectious, and she threw back her head and laughed,
tossing all her dire thoughts to the wind. She turned and skated away, but he
quickly caught up with her. “Here, try this,” he challenged as he expertly turned in
front of her, capturing her hands in his and resting one of them on his
shoulder. With no apparent effort on his part, he skated backwards while
guiding her into the steps of a waltz. Though awkward at first, she soon found
she actually did move more gracefully on skates with all her petticoats than
she did on dry land. She began to hum a tune in time to their movements. Did he feel the electricity like she did; the need to touch
him even when she knew she shouldn’t? She tilted her head back, her gaze taking
in the wayward lock of black hair falling across his forehead, the gray at the
temples that only enhanced his appearance. When she shrugged negligently to
relieve the tension, he grinned, his full sensuous lips parting to reveal
straight white teeth. She lightly tugged on his lapels to bring him closer. As often as they had kissed recently, she should have been
prepared. Even so, it amazed her at how quickly she saw passion ignite in his
gaze before her eyes drifted closed. The buzzing in her head reminded her of the accident at the
carousel, and she wondered if she would open her eyes and be back in Dallas.
Perhaps becoming involved with a man from the wrong century was what she needed
to return to her own time. When the pressure on her spine and mouth lessened and she
opened her eyes, however, she found Nicholas staring strangely at her. Her
mittened fingers shook as they touched her mouth, still tender from his kiss;
her heart pounded a rhythm too fast to count. She had remained in Nicholas’s
time. Tears stung her eyes as she realized she was immensely glad she had not
been transported. “Uncle Nicholas, Miss Eastman — watch!” Amanda called for their
attention and she didn’t have time to dwell on her mixed up emotions. “Be careful, Muffin,” Nicholas called to his niece, ever
mindful of their safety. Jaci heard the yearning in his voice, and knew he
thought of Amanda as his own daughter. “Oh, Uncle Nicholas, you know I am. Don’t be an old
fuddy-duddy.” Suddenly her scream rent the still morning. Horrified, Jaci
watched as, in slow motion, Amanda began to sink through the ice. “Amanda!” Nicholas bellowed a denial even as he raced toward
the hole that had swallowed his niece. *** If you’d like to find
out what happens next, grab a copy of “Spinning Through Time” at https://books2read.com/Spinning-Through-Time. If winter isn’t your thing but you still want a getaway, how about taking a trip to a ghost town in Nevada (Prospecting for Love); the gold mines of the Black Hills (Loving Charlie Forever) or travel the river on a riverboat (Hold on to the Past). Time travels are quite inexpensive and require no luggage or boarding passes! Find all my time travels and more at https://bwlpublishing.ca/baldwin-barbara/. Regardless
of what the groundhog says, spring WILL come and we will CELEBRATE! Barb
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Brrr. The best way to experience snow for me is reading about it while enjoying the balmy climate of Arizona. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteI enjoy snow but rather looking at it from inside my warm house
ReplyDeleteThe idea of time-travelling is fascinating. And so is your story, "Spinning Through Time."
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