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I love writing cozy/whodunit mysteries. But this time, I’m
venturing out of my comfort zone. With, ‘Moving is Murder.’ This mystery
is in the thriller genre.
The concept for this thriller came to me with the thought of
what would happen if my protagonist, Mabel, wasn’t as clever as she thought. And
she got into a heap of trouble? I was going to use Mabel, my leading character from
my cozy mystery series. But I was advised early on to bring in a new character.
The readers of my cozy mystery series would not believe Mabel could get herself
into the dire circumstances that envelop my new protagonist, Linda.
My thriller starts out like any cozy mystery. Things go awry
when Linda trusts the wrong person.
It’s a fast-paced thriller. And even as I wrote it. I wasn’t
sure if Linda would best the antagonist.
How well do you know your neighbours?
Linda Burton is house-sitting for her aunt’s friend in the pretty little
town of Glenhaven. Linda, who has spent her working career in the city, has
fallen in love with the pleasant little country village. Everyone she has met
is so friendly.
Strolling down the alley one evening in search of Gertrude, a pet cat.
Linda hears a voice complaining about burying a body. Not completely convinced
she heard correctly. Linda decides to emulate her heroes. Amateur detectives.
She tries her hand at detecting. Unfortunately, Linda puts her trust in the
wrong person.
Can Linda outwit the killer? Will her aunt Violet figure out the clues
Linda has left? And even if Violet does, will it be too late for Linda? And
will Violet fall into the same trap?
An excerpt from ‘Moving is Murder.
Chapter One
Linda was
house-sitting for Mabel Havelock. Mabel had broken her foot. She was a good
friend of Violet Ficher, Linda’s aunt. Her Aunt Violet explained that she had
to get Mabel out of town and away from her garden. Because broken foot or not,
Mabel would be out in the garden, hoeing and weeding. So, her aunt took Mabel
to Calgary, where they both had daughters.
Linda, who was
newly divorced, had just quit her job as a kindergarten teacher. Now, she was
between jobs and at loose ends. The peace and quiet of house-sitting appealed
to her.
She’d been a
kindergarten teacher at a school in Regina for ten years. Linda loved teaching
the children. But then, after her husband of ten years walked out on her for
another woman. Linda decided it was time to make a complete change in her life.
Linda often visited her aunt in Glenhaven and loved the sleepy little town.
City life was fine while she was working, but now the country life was calling.
Maybe not only a change of jobs but also a change of location was what she
needed. She was still young at thirty. She’d find a job. Her lips twisted. Her
ex-husband Howard’s gift to her on her thirtieth birthday was the announcement
he was leaving her for a younger woman.
Linda took in a
deep breath of the fragrant, fresh air. She felt the tension leave her body.
Yes, this friendly community of Glenhaven looked inviting. It might be time to
move.
“Gertrude,” Linda
called again. She wanted the cat in the house. If something happened to
Gertrude while she was house-sitting, she would never forgive herself. Linda
had grown very fond of the tabby cat. Her ex said having a pet in an apartment
was unfair to the animal to be alone all day. And as always, she’d been
compliant. It was time to make decisions for herself. If she did move to
Glenhaven, she would get a cat. She had fallen in love with Gertrude.
A small furry
animal shot across the lawn. The animal stopped and crouched. Looking down from
the porch, Linda couldn’t tell if it was the cat, a gopher, or a squirrel. The
animal darted across the grass into the lilac bushes. “Kitty, kitty,” Linda
called in the high-pitched voice one used for calling cats. She padded down the
porch steps and across the lawn. Linda sat on her heels, peered under the
shrub, and called again. She pressed her lips together and sighed. There was no
answering meow.
Linda scrambled to her feet and brushed the grass off her
knees. It would be a fabulous evening for a stroll down the back lane.
Something she would never consider in the city, but she might find Gertrude,
who was probably a frequent visitor down the alley. The alleyway, lined with
trees and hedges, was undoubtedly good hunting for the errant cat. But Mabel’s
cat was old, and Linda suspected Gertrude was unsuccessful in her hunts.
A brilliant streak of light shot across the night sky,
leaving a long, shimmering white tail. Linda tilted her head back, watching the
path of the meteor. The meteor disappeared as quickly as it came. Didn’t people
make a wish on a shooting star? If she had, what would she want to wish for?
Maybe good health? She was already healthy. Good fortune? She was fortunate. A
safe and happy life? Linda smiled. The shooting star was long gone. Too late to
make a wish.
Linda trod across the lawn. Dew was already forming, making
the grass damp. Her feet, encased in red rubber flip-flops, felt squishy. “Gertrude,”
she called as she ducked under a branch from a low-hanging tree. A leafy twig
brushed her head. Combing the leaves from her hair, Linda continued down the
back alley, calling for the cat. She listened. No answering meow happened, just
rustling in the grass as some small rodent scurried away.
Continuing her trek down the laneway, Linda pursed her lips
and shook her head. A lot of the backyards had overgrown hedges, such a
contrast to the neighbours’ front yards. The yards along the street were
well-maintained. With green-mowed lawns and neat, well-tended flowerbeds. If
she could see past the shrubs and trees, would she also see untidy backyards?
As she passed a tall wooden-planked backyard fence, Linda
chuckled to herself. Who were Mabel’s neighbours trying to keep out? After all,
this was little Glenhaven, Saskatchewan. Linda lived in Regina and never walked
down a back alley alone at night. But Linda felt at ease in Glenhaven, a
friendly little community in the middle of the Canadian prairies. She had nothing
to fear as she walked down the dark alley, even though she had only the moon
and the stars to guide her.
A low, menacing growl sent the hairs on the back of Linda’s
neck to stand up. She sucked in her breath and froze. The threatening growl
came from behind a tall chain-link fence. Ferocious barking followed. Linda’s
heart leapt as she darted to the far side of the lane, falling on her hands and
knees. Scrambling to her feet, she looked across the narrow gravel road. A
massive Rottweiler charged at the metal fence. The fence shook. Linda recoiled,
backing up even farther from the raging beast. The enormous Rottweiler bared
its teeth, viciously growling and barking. The angry animal, snarling and
growling, lunged repeatedly at the fence. The chain-link fence rattled, swaying
with each leap. The enraged Rottweiler stood on its hind legs, pawing to get out.
Linda turned and fled. Her short legs pumped as her flip-flops slapped the
gravelled laneway. She raced down the alley away from the chain-link monster.
When the barking stopped, Linda stopped running and bent over. She put her
hands on her knees, her breath coming in gulps. Who the heck lived there? And
what did they have, that needed a Rottweiler to protect?
Linda’s breath eased. She stood, brushed off her hands and
knees, peering down the dark alley toward the chain-link monster. She would
walk down to the other end of the alleyway and return home via the sidewalk. There
was no way she was going back near that crazy dog. Sure, the dog was behind the
chain-link fence. But what if somehow it escaped? She was not going to take
that chance.
A light gust of wind whistling through the leaves in the
trees blew Linda’s short auburn hair. The warm breeze felt wonderful on her
bare arms. Overhead, the stars twinkled, and a sliver of the moon appeared now
and again through the clouds. Country living was the best, Linda thought
as she continued her stroll. Everyone here would know everyone on the block. In
the city, you were lucky if you knew who lived in the next apartment. And you
minded your own business. She heard that people in a small town were a little
nosey. But maybe that was the price you paid for living in a caring community. Someone
would always be ready to offer a helping hand. The idea of moving to Glenhaven
was growing. She was house-sitting for Mabel for a week. She’d see at the end
of the week if she still thought that moving was a good idea.
Strange high-pitched chirping sounds made Linda stop in her
tracks. Her eyes darted, searching in the darkness for the source of the weird
chattering. It definitely didn’t sound like crickets or birds. Uttering a
small, frightened cry, Linda ducked. A flock of chirping, bird-like creatures flew
straight at her from across the alley. She sucked in her breath, whimpering as
she felt the flutter of wings inches above her head. The hoard of small black,
clicking creatures beat their wings, circling. Linda covered her head with her
hands. Were these bats? Didn’t bats get in your hair? Or was that an old wives’
tale? It was never an old husband’s tale. Giggling nervously, Linda hunkered
close to the ground.
The strange fluttering hoard flew off into the night. Linda rose
to her feet, brushing the dirt from her hands on her denim shorts. She looked
at the night sky, only the moon and the stars. No flying, nocturnal creatures.
Linda blew out a breath. Whatever they were, they had disappeared. Satisfied, Linda
resumed her walk. Her feet crunched on the gravel. It was quiet. The only
sounds now were the crickets, no high-pitched chirping bats. A dog barked in
the distance, not the ferocious barking monster dog. This was more of a
yapping. Was Gertrude in the dog’s yard?
Linda hurried down the rutted alley, listening for a cat and
dog fight. Her flip-flop twisted, coming off her foot, and she stepped on a
stone. Linda grimaced. She ought to have worn runners. She picked up her sandal
and hopped on one foot to an old, weathered wooden garbage stand. She sat on
the edge of the structure, rubbing her foot. Examining her flip-flop, she
pondered the name. Flip-flop was an apt name for the sandal. The darn thing
flipped off her foot.
Linda wrinkled her nose at an unpleasant odour, and it
wasn’t the garbage stand. Her Aunt Violet told her the town had stopped the
back-alley garbage pickup four years ago. Mabel left a note with the day that
the town collected the garbage. And the instructions to wheel the garbage bin
to the end of the driveway for garbage pickup. No, the tall hedge behind the
garbage stand was the source of the peculiar stinky odour. Linda decided the
hedgerow must be boxwood. It was a beautiful hedge, but it had an odd smell.
She remembered the odor from her childhood. Her mother had a boxwood border in
her yard.
“Son of a bitch,” swore a man from the other side of the
hedge.
Linda stopped shaking her flip-flop and froze. Was that
digging? What an odd time to be gardening. The man swore again. Linda dropped
her sandal and tried to peer through the thick hedge behind the old garbage
stand.
“Son of a bitch, first I dig the damn grave, then I have to
fill the damn thing up.”
The man grunted, and the sound of digging continued. “Damn
it, all to hell. Where else am I supposed to hide the damn body?”
A chill ran down Linda’s spine. Her heart thumped in her
chest. She held her breath, afraid to make a sound. On the other side of the
hedge a man was digging a grave.
A small furry creature scrambled up beside her. The furball
was Gertrude. The orange tabby cat climbed onto her lap, angrily meowing in a
high-pitched wail. Linda hugged the cat. Her eyes darted to the hedge. Would
the man come out to investigate?
A large barking dog came charging down the back lane.
Gertrude’s back arched. She hissed, jumped out of Linda’s arms, and shot into
the nearby hedge. The dog closed in on Linda. The big, shaggy sheepdog stopped,
sniffed her, then licked her face. Still stunned at what she’d heard, Linda,
with shaking hands, patted the friendly dog’s head. Who was that man? And who
was he talking to? Were there two men?
Across the alleyway, an outside light turned on, and a door
slammed. “Bongo, Bongo, get back here. Bongo, Bongo. Here, boy.” The dog gave
Linda one last lick, shook his furry coat, and loped back up the lane. “Here,
boy. Good boy,” a man’s voice said. The door banged shut, and the outside light
shut off.
Linda sat very still, her head cocked, listening for the
ominous voice. All was quiet. There were no voices. Menacing or otherwise, only
the breeze rustling the leaves in the shrubbery. Her heart leapt. Was the man
peeking out at her through the hedge? She scrambled to her feet. And bending
low to the ground, Linda hastened a retreat. Her heart pounded as fast as her
feet, back down the alley, unmindful of the ruts and potholes. She ran with one
sandal on her foot, the other abandoned in the weeds by the garbage stand. The
chain-link monster greeted her by charging the fence. The ferocious barking gave
her more reason to run. The backyard light was a welcoming sight. Her breath
came in big gulps as she plowed straight through the garden. The other
flip-flop flew off, and Linda’s bare feet sunk into the soft soil. Sitting at the
top of the porch steps was Gertrude. The cat greeted her with an impatient
meow.
Great start of an intriguing story. Wishing you the very best with this novel. Thanks for sharing.
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