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I live in central Minnesota and have all my life. I have taught 8th grade English plus 6th and 8th grade health in the same room in the same district for 30 years. Some say I have “staying power”. I am fiercely dedicated to the things in life that make my heart happy – books books books, my family, my animals, and my writing. My husband and I ride a Harley and our horses when we’re not working on some part of our hobby farm. I have way too many hobbies, but they bring me joy and, I think, help keep me young.
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Two days before Christmas the unthinkable happens when Snowflakes, the adorable toy poodle, is stolen from Cole Donahue’s pick-up truck in a supermarket parking lot.
Dog sitting for his soon to be ex-wife, Elsa Randolph, when the theft took place, Cole and Elsa temporarily set their differences aside and immediately begin their search with a poster and social media blitz.
Meanwhile, Snowflakes, forced to rely on the kindness of strangers, experiences her fair share of holiday season adventures. She even makes friends with Mr. Christmas himself.
Working together to find the missing poodle, will Cole and Elsa rekindle their love despite the seemingly insurmountable challenges that caused their break up? Will Snowflakes be reunited with her family in time for Christmas?
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I recently – and wonderfully – completed my first mystery novel, then tentatively titled So, A Psychopath walked into a bar. I quickly discovered that the novel would not stand alone. A synopsis was required. As a freelance journalist and communications specialist, I’ve put together a lifetime of pitches and proposals. Still, I spent some time reading up on what makes a successful synopsis. Then I wrote my own.
My synopsis
does not follow the traditional pattern, but most of the required elements are
there. I wondered if this would pass muster. Overall, the people I shared the
synopsis with liked it. One person didn’t like it at all and said it would
never pass muster with publishers. I took a long hard look and, respectfully,
disagreed.
This was
nerve-wracking. I knew it would be easier to simply follow the path well taken,
but I felt I needed to branch out. I entered a shorter version of my synopsis
in the Synopsis Skirmish contest – and won. The judge (one of my favorite
people) had this to say: The author’s handling of voice in this synopsis is so
powerful, it made me want to read the novel right away. The synopsis is unusual
and intriguing—a winning combination.
When the
acquisitions editor at BWL (another of my favorite people) reached out to me
requesting a full copy of my manuscript, she noted, “We
were quite taken with your synopsis.”
The synopsis issue has driven home to me the need to listen
to yourself, that inner voice that knows you better than anyone. At the same
time, it has taught me more about flexibility and being open to feedback. There
is nothing as helpful as constructive criticism (whether accepted or not) and
editors are worth their weight in gold.
I thought I’d share my synopsis – my very first – with you.
I’d love to know what you think.
Synopsis
So, A psychopath walked into a bar: A
Riel Brava Mystery
By donalee Moulton
Let’s start with
the obvious.
Meet Riel Brava.
Attractive. Razor-sharp. Ambitious.
Riel, born and bred in Santa Barbara,
California, has been transplanted to Nova Scotia where he is CEO of the
Canadian Cannabis Corporation (CCC). It’s business as usual until Riel finds
the company’s comptroller hanging by a thread. Actually, several threads. It
doesn’t take the police long to determine all is not as it appears.
Let’s dive
beneath the surface.
Meet Riel Brava. Observant. Cautious. Psychopathic.
Not the Dexter-Hannibal Lecter-Norman
Bates kind of psychopath. The kind who live and work among us, mostly
unnoticed, often successful, always on full alert their differences will be
uncovered. Riel is personable, even charming. He’s keen to understand how the
human mind works, so he’ll blend in. After all, his goal is to be president of
the United States. (An aspiration that will feature in future books.)
Let’s talk plot.
So Norm Bedwell has apparently hanged
himself in his office at CCC. Emphasis on apparently. It takes Detective Lin
Raynes mere minutes to suspect the obvious is deceiving and what appears to be
death by suicide is actually a murder. Over the course of 13 chapters (there is
also an introductory chapter), he works to uncover and discover who would want
Bedwell dead and how they could have pulled the murder off.
He’s not alone. In an unusual pairing,
Raynes and Riel work together to chase down leads – the bully who tortured
Bedwell’s son at school, the mysterious orange truck that belongs to no CCC
employee but was parked in the company lot the night Bedwell was murdered, the
employee, who despite stringent security measures, has managed to steal weed
from CCC and start a healthy little illegal business.
Raynes manages to engage Riel, albeit
reluctantly, in the hunt for Bedwell’s killer, and in the process, the seeds of
an unexpected and unusual friendship are sown. (These seeds will blossom in
subsequent books.)
Various motives are explored through a
number of suspects – revenge, fear, greed – but ultimately, it’s love that becomes
the reason Norm Bedwell no longer lives. Unfortunately, the evidence is
circumstantial. Raynes and Riel concoct a scheme to draw a confession out of
the killer, but that plan is never put into place. Instead, Riel finds himself
on the receiving end of a rifle in the ribs and a long drive to the middle of
Nowhere, Nova Scotia.
Let’s look at the
core cast of returning characters. You’ll like them all.
Tiffany Brava. Riel’s wife and loyal
supporter. Somewhere in the recesses of her mind, Tiffany knows Riel is not
quite like everyone else – and why. For now, that door is closed. What’s openly
obvious is her affection for her husband, her loyalty, and her acumen. Don’t
count Tiffany out as the dumb blonde. Oh yes, she’s vegan.
Franklin Raynes. The Halifax Police
Department’s lead detective on this case is Black, quintessentially Nova
Scotian, and a consummate charmer. He can read the room and respond accordingly.
He takes a shine to Riel, and also realizes how helpful the psychopath can be
in solving this case. (Yes, Lin Raynes is privy to Riel’s deepest secret, but
he doesn’t admit it to his new friend – just yet.) Oh yeah, Raynes also does
this thing with his left eyebrow.
Senator John Williams. Tiffany’s dad |
Riel’s father-in-law is the Democratic Senator for District 19. A seasoned and
senior politician, Williams is a co-owner of CCC, although it’s not an asset he
talks about with constituents. He’s brusque, except where his daughter is
concerned, and well connected, even in Canada.
Zahra
Bashir. A practising Muslim and savvy TV
reporter who’s always on the lookout for the inside scoop. Bashir makes many of
the other characters very nervous despite her friendly demeanor.
David Clements. The recreational
cannabis sector in Canada is heavily regulated. Clements is the federal DOJ’s
contact for Riel. Their relationship is one of power and powerful expectations.
Clements holds that power. A minor character, Clements plays an important role.
He’s the first person to use a special word.
There are other characters introduced
in this book who will also return but play a smaller role in this mystery.
Let’s look at the
cast of characters in the book. You won’t like them all.
Faye Bedwell, distraught and
disrespected wife of Norm Bedwell
Bran Bedwell, the Bedwell’s
12-year-old son who takes a liking to Riel. Good grief.
Thorne, media consultant and very
protective of Riel
The bully and his parents.
The poor sod who owns the orange
truck.
The killer.
What’s familiar
about So, A psychopath walked into a bar to make mystery fans feel at
home
·
It’s fast-paced.
·
It lays out a path of breadcrumbs that lead, ultimately, to the
killer. First, of course, the path branches off in several misdirections.
·
It creates suspense.
·
It builds understanding and affection for key characters.
·
It leaves readers wanting more.
What’s novel
about the book to make the mystery stand apart and readers turning pages
·
It introduces a unique character that, ironically, we empathize
with
·
It’s funny as hell
·
It’s written by an award-winning journalist who knows both how to
tell a story and how to use words to maximum effect
Riel Brava: Vital
Statistics
Height: 6’1
Weight: 165 pounds
Waist: 35 inches
Age: 37
Spouse: Tiffany, the vegan
Job: CEO, Canadian Cannabis Corp.
Location: Elmsdale, Nova Scotia,
Canada
Ambition: President of the United
States of America
Favorite food: Donairs (definitely not
vegan)
Top personality trait: Psychopath
Burning question: What the hell’s a
chunderf**k
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In the vegetable aisle at my local supermarket, I came across the treasurer of a local organisation to which I belong. In this capacity as bean counter in chief, she has to know how many beans make five. And counting was exactly what she was doing, making hard work of putting runner beans one by one into her brown paper bag. Maybe she wanted to be sure each family member would receive a precise number. This bean counter completed her arithmetic, leaving the space for me to grab three handfuls which I knew from experience was the perfect amount for my kitchen.
Any kind of grocery shopping is for me a fairly mindless occupation, and while continuing around the aisles I remembered how runner beans had figured in my childhood. My father grew them in what was known as the 'kitchen garden'. My mother used to send me as a young child to pick them, adding Mind you count them. Perhaps she really needed to know the exact number, or else she was encouraging me to use my number skills. In primary school, we grew beans in jar as a science experiment. I don't remember, and probably never understood, why. As homework, I had to grow one in a jar and write up its progress. My mother was not impressed when I used one of her jars she reserved for jam making. And probably my teacher was not impressed when my bean failed to do anything except shrivel up. Bottom of the class - again!
May you enjoy growing and/or eating beans. And, of course, enjoy reading . Best wishes, Priscilla.
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Famous authors and
their famous words … and the unusual places in which they were written.
It was interesting
to discover where some very well known authors chose to tap their genius, and a
few might surprise you. From the confines of a coffin to a luxurious Victorian bathtub
complete with fresh fruit, the jewels of their imagination were polished to
perfection.
For most authors,
famous or otherwise, the best place is the quietest place, while others find
their muse in the midst of everyday commotion – some even seek it to start the
flow of their creative juices. For me it was the silence and sweet smell of a
summer haymow. That’s where I wrote my first novel, Dare To Inherit, and I was certainly
not alone while there. Watching nearby with curious intent was a whole
sisterhood of barn cats of various sizes and descriptions. However it could
only ever be a short-lived writing space because when the fields begin to ripen
the mow is quickly restocked - with no room for authors.
A café was the now
famous choice of J K Rowling while creating a good portion of Harry Potter and
the Philosopher’s Stone. And Dame Edith Sitwell prepared for her day’s writing by
lying, until inspired, in an actual coffin. And how about Sir Walter Scott? One
of his most famous poems, Marmion: A Tale of Flodden Field, came about while
riding horseback in the hills not far from Edinburgh, Scotland. Said the much-celebrated
bard himself: “I had many a grand gallop among these braes when I was thinking
of Marmion.”
As I Lay Dying is
the epic Southern Gothic novel by one of the all-time greats, 1949 Nobel Prize in
Literature winner, William Faulkner. It was written in a most surprising place,
a power plant, where Faulkner was working as a supervisor during the night
shift. And the incomparable Maya Angelou wrote in rented hotel rooms where she
created her magnificent brand of magic. British spy novelist John le Carré often wrote while
riding trains, while Gertrude Stein, American writer, poet and playwright, equally
inspired by motion it seems, put pen and paper to good use in her Model T.
Charles Dickens usually
chose a more traditional spot to write some of the best literature ever written,
classic novels such as The Pickwick Papers, A Christmas Carol, David
Copperfield and more, and that was while sitting at his desk. In fact his own desk
and chair were so vital to his creative process that he’d have the pair shipped
to him during extended absences from home. For Virginia Woolf, considered one
of the foremost modernists of the Twentieth Century, it was a much-loved old
armchair in a basement storage room, and Agatha Christie’s legendary mystery
plots were sorted out while sitting in a large Victorian bathtub - eating fresh
plump apples.
Stephen King is
said to have used the laundry room in the family’s doublewide trailer during
the early days of his writing career, at least that’s where Carrie was written
on a makeshift desk wedged between the washer and dryer. And Charlotte Webb’s
E. B. White often chose his own busy living room with his family around him to write
his masterpieces, pointing out: “A writer who waits for ideal conditions under
which to work will die without putting a word on paper.”
In addition to a particular
space, there were also favourite writing times preferred by many famous
authors. It’s said that Hemmingway was inspired by the first light of morning.
For Mark Twain, who wrote every day, it was after tucking away a generous meal
at the breakfast table that held him until it was time for dinner. During the
intervening hours he wrote, and if his family should need him, “they would blow
a loud horn and he would come.”
George Bernard
Shaw also liked to write during the day and presumably only when the sun was
shining. To accomplish that he chose a most unique setting to create his Pygmalion,
a custom-made rotating hut in his backyard. The why of such a contraption is simple, Shaw liked to write while sitting
in the direct path of the sun and the rotating hut accomplished that.
Every author knows
what suits them best and they instinctively gravitate toward that. Personally I
like to lose myself in the world I’m creating, and ideally with no
interruptions. Unfortunately even one interruption can put the brakes on a
delicious creative flow. Sometimes it stops it altogether if the interruption
is prolonged, although it’s something that we as authors must routinely rise
above. Other times of course nothing can stop the rush of a good story when all
we can do is work at breakneck speed to capture it as quickly as it’s coming to
us. I sometimes write in longhand and such was the case with Storms in the
Valley, book two of the Emerald Valley Ranch series. That story told itself, I
was just along for the ride. All I had to do was get it down on paper and I
still remember my pen racing across the page, enjoying the story as it unfolded.
The sounds of nature, such as wind, birdsong, the hooting of an owl or the scream of seagulls, rain, thunder, a babbling brook, ocean waves breaking on a pebbled beach, and on and on, are not interruptions at all but rather an accompanying natural orchestra that can help set the scene. In some cases there can be a little too much nature, such as a young bear stretched out under the deck of my tiny cottage on a hot afternoon. That’s where I went to write, and as it turns out it’s also where the bear went to sleep, so I left quietly and so did the bear at some point.
I named my tiny cottage that sits by the side of a lake, Birch Petal, nestled as it is in a stand of handsome white and yellow birch trees. Michael created this space for me - a little think tank where I could write, and many years before that he’d actually built the beautiful three-acre lake itself. The view from the Birch Petal deck never failed to inspire me.
No matter where
writers may write - or when, all authors aspire to be famous. It’s the
storyteller in us, and the audience we seek to entertain. And no matter the
level of our success, most authors write for that one special someone in their
life. I wrote for my beloved Michael.
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