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Friday, May 31, 2019
Priscilla Brown considers carrots and cliffs
Men are off Cristina's essentials list during her working holiday at a luxury Caribbean resort.
But can the resort's zany charmer of a pilot break through her defences?
Carrots have received many mentions in literature. Grimm wrote a fairytale The Carrot King; Shakespeare mentioned them in several plays; Edward Lear in a limerick rhymed about a purchase of two parrots fed on carrots (the parrots who frequent my garden turned up their beaks at shredded carrot).
Real carrots for me are just another vegetable, arranged on a dinner plate or shredded onto salad, their colour cheering up the conglomeration of all that green stuff. Perhaps, like me, as a child you were told to "eat your vegies". If you did, something nice may come your way; if you threw a tantrum, you were sent to bed early. The old carrot and stick idiom.
Fiction writers use carrots as turn-the-page bait. A character wants something that's out of reach, but if s/he accepts the dangled "carrot", for example, adjusting behaviour, overcoming a challenge, telling the truth, the desired outcome may be attainable. We want the reader to worry about the character; will s/he get this elusive something, and if not, what will happen? Tension, conflict, suspense.
In One Thousand and One Nights, each night Scheherazade tells the king a story. Leaving it incomplete, she promises to finish it the following night, so that he, keen to hear the endings, abandons his plan to kill her. Carrots save her life.
Cliffhangers are similar to
carrots in that they encourage readers to continue with the story, eager
to know what happens next. Writers use a chapter or scene with a
dramatic climactic ending to raise the stakes for the characters: a
question or situation unresolved, a physical threat or sense of
foreboding or urgency, distressing information...scenarios which leave
the reader in suspense.
In Where the Heart Is, the cliffhanger is almost literal. After an evening of sexy dancing, the protagonists are perched on a dangerous cliff top. She badly wants to sleep with him, but won't until he reveals a secret she believes he's holding. He wants to sleep with her but won't because he's afraid of falling in love and she must return to her home country. The chapter ends with just three words from him, words which devastate her.
Enjoy the carrots and cliffs in your reading! Priscilla
Thursday, May 30, 2019
They say an army travels on its stomach. So do tourists. Margaret Hanna
Traveling
to a foreign country entails learning about the culture, and culture involves
food. What a feast for the senses!
Mexico: The best place to find food is in the market.
Sounds, sights and smells assault you at the entrance. You enter, dazed and
confused at what at first seems like a maze of stalls and people and “stuff.”
Take heart. The adventure awaits.
The
pineapple vendor selling thick, juicy, sweet slices for pennies apiece. I
bought one. Juice ran down my chin as I ate it. It was so good I had to have
another. And another.
The lady
selling blue corn tortillas. She patiently sorted through her stock to find
ones without any holes. If you have never eaten a blue corn tortilla, well, you
don’t know what you’re missing. They are so flavourful and aromatic, not at all
like the packaged tortillas you buy at the supermarket.
The fruit
vendor had piles of large green “things” I had never seen before. I asked my
friend, “Is that a squash?” “No, that’s a papaya!” (That was in 1987, before
such exotic fruit appeared in Saskatchewan supermarkets.) What a taste treat I
was in for. I think I ate half the papaya myself.
The mole
vendor (“mole” is a paste that you make into a sauce). Red, green and black
mole, ready to serve over chicken, enchiladas, fish, chilis rellenos, or
whatever else. Eat your heart out, ketchup.
Some
places, like the meat market, are not for the faint of heart. Sides of beef or
pork and freshly killed chickens with feathers, heads and feet still attached
hang in conditions that would give a Canadian food inspector a heart attack.
But you know that the meat you cook for supper was freshly killed that morning.
France: Just around the corner from our little hotel
was a little plaza with an open-air market. Fresh fruit and vegetables, good
cheeses, crunchy bread and bottles of unlabeled but extremely drinkable red
table wine, all relatively inexpensive. We often created our lunches from these
vendors.
We saw open-air
markets everywhere. Some operated every day, some only once a week. But
everything was fresh. Tomatoes smelled like tomatoes; peppers like peppers.
And the
bakeries. Oh my! The smell of freshly baked bread, the CRUNCH of a buttery
croissant that disintegrated into a thousand delectable crumbs, exquisitely
decorated petit-fours – how could one resist? Calories? Who’s counting?
Indonesia: An array of vegetables and fruits we had
never seen before. Alas, we spoke little Bahasa Indonesian; they spoke even
less English. We never did learn the names; that did not lessen their taste. Or
our enjoyment.
Ah, but
coffee! Powdered, not ground. Throw a handful or two thrown into a pot, pour
boiling water over. Let steep. Inhale the aroma. Drink. Hot, black and strong,
but never bitter. We have yet to find coffee that good anywhere else.
Newfoundland and Labrador: A food and cultural experience of
a different sort. We were traveling through Labrador with our truck and camper,
and arrived via overnight ferry at a small outport. We needed to restock our
fridge so we headed to the nearest grocery store. What a shock! There was
nothing fresh, only ancient vegetables and fruit – wizened apples, black and
shriveled cabbage, – and frozen meat encased in layers of frost. It brought to
mind the limited stocks we had grown up with in our small prairie town
groceries stores – one variety of apples (usually Macintosh), cabbage, head
lettuce (who knew it was called “Iceberg”?), onions, potatoes, maybe turnips
and parsnips, and four wan tomatoes in a cardboard sleeve with a cellophane
window. And we thought this was just fine because we knew nothing else!
How spoiled
we have become, with access to almost every variety of food in our grocery
stores, even if it wasn’t picked just yesterday.
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My grandmother, Addie, wasn’t sure
what she would find the first time she went to Mr. Haddad’s store in Meyronne,
for everything had to be freighted in, a two-day wagon trip if coming from
Morse or three days from Moose Jaw. As you can imagine, there was little that
was fresh. Here’s what she saw (from Chapter 7 of “Our Bull’s Loose in Town!” Tales from the Homestead):
“I knew better than to expect
shopping like in Toronto or even Dundalk; even so, my heart dropped when I saw
the Meyronne store. A false front wooden building with a sign on the front that
said, “General Store,” plopped out there in the bald prairie, no side-walk, no
street, not even a hitching rail for the horses, just trails leading off in all
directions.
We walked into the store and when my
eyes adjusted to the dimness, I was quite surprised at what I saw. Oatmeal,
flour, sugar, salt, tea, dried beans and peas, dry mustard, some canned goods –
I remember canned sardines particularly, – crackers, pails of lard, and some
dried apples, although they looked as if they had arrived last century. A
barrel of pickles and another barrel of salt pork sat in a corner. One shelf
held tin plates and cups, lamp chimneys and wicks, saucepans, frying pans and
matches. Underneath were pails, kegs of nails and bottles of kerosene. Behind
the counter, there were shelves of lye soap, liniment, Perry Davis Pain Killer
and Dr. Thomas Eclectic Oil.”
Wednesday, May 29, 2019
Writing Life Self Care
Lying fallow is part of the writing life, it seems, every bit as much as the obsessed hustle of those "creative" moments, when The Spirit of Tell Me a Story takes possession. I'm still a writer, though, even if nothing is coming out, information is always coming in, whether it's just this year's peonies, lanky from over-dosing on fertilizer (I think) and the record 12 months of rain-rain-rain we've just logged here in PA, or the burst of color around the base of the Witch Hazel. Here are little moments of lovely that I'm collecting a memory of for later.
.
May into June I always seem to be waiting for something. I'm wondering if it's because 50+ years ago, my new husband and I were living in a basement apartment in Boston. I was awaiting the birth of a first child. We were taking time off from college, having our baby and getting our feet under us a married couple. It was hot as the hinges of hell before a/c there in the city, and I, sweaty and fat, ironed my husbands shirts in a hallway which connected the three rooms in which we lived.
It was also the summer of the Boston Strangler, so being alone in a basement apartment for hours every day was--let us say--unnerving. We didn't have a television, only a radio, but enough scary news came, on the hour, via that. I'll never forget the moments of stepping out into the hall, listening for the sound of human activity in the laundry-cum-trash bin-area, and, finally, after deciding the coast was clear, turning and swiftly locking the door behind me before running as fast as a heavily pregnant 19 year old can go upstairs to the lobby. It was not a transition I looked forward to. I walked along the burning sidewalks to the Shop Rite many blocks away with my little, happily anticipating the shade of each and every ragged city tree.
I spent a lot of head time in either past or future back then--the mysterious trial of labor lay ahead of me as well as the gender surprise which, in those days, only came upon the birth of the baby. An only child and a bookworm, my education came not from female relatives or neighbors, but from Alan Guttmacher's Pregnancy & Childbirth, as well as a then revolutionary English book called Natural Childbirth, by Dick Grantly.
At the clinic, when I asked about this method, I was cautioned rather sharply that "American Women are too weak for that." An epidural, I was informed, was the closest I could get to "natural." I also had a well-worn copy of The Womanly Art of Breastfeeding, loaned to me by a mother of eight who my husband used to baby sit for. In the end, the anticipated drama of "going into labor," --such a standard of books and movies--never happened. One day, I rode the bus to the hospital and then was required to stay. By the time they'd given me the epidural, my son had practically arrived, so, in the end, I was glad I'd geekily studied the Grantly book with care and had learned some strategies to deal with what I was supposed to be "too weak" to endure.
Time has passed, lots of it! Those childbirth stories I can tell are part of history, fifty years past, tales that are triggered by birthdays and Call The Midwife. That hapless younger self is gone, replaced by one that is older, wiser, but doubtless just as hapless as ever. This body hurts for no discernible reason at times, but that's apparently the new normal, as entropy takes hold. We all know the jokes: "Past your sell-by date" etc. I've got several stories begun--two series books I want to complete--but it's all on hold.
Zauberkraft: Black
(And Where oh Where is Zauberkraft: Green?)
Here I sit, enough to eat, roof over my head, surrounded by green--the weary old trees with holes full of starlings and woodpeckers, and the spry young trees, ones "I've known from nut and acorn" like the Ent, Treebeard, in LOTR. It's sufficient, the light and the green.
"To see a world in a grain of sand and heaven in a wild flower
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand and eternity in an hour."
~~William Blake
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I've realized The Muse will come back when (and if) She/He/It feels like it. In the meantime, try on a dragon tail; lighten up, reminisce with small pieces concerning pains and pleasures past, enjoy your bright little spark of human consciousness--and scribble on!
~~Juliet Waldron
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Tuesday, May 28, 2019
Do you Really Know the Characters in your Novel? by Connie Vines
Before a writer starts the first draft of a novel, the writer
has the plot-points drafted. The setting,
profession, manner of dress and speech have been established. The writer knows what the character looks like.
The writer knows the characters, right?
Maybe. Or maybe not.
Yes, there are character questionnaires, we’ve all seen them
and groaned. Two- hundred plus questions,
who has time for that?
Do:
- Approach
it as a brainstorming exercise
- Understand
that your in-depth knowledge of the character will bleed into your
writing, even if the vast majority of this information is never written in
your manuscript
Don't:
- Use
it to start building a character - you should already have the broad
brushstrokes of your character, including what drives them and their
biggest flaw
- Use
all of the information in your novel - most of the answers should be internalized,
not spelled out
Basic Character Questions
- First
name?
- Surname?
- Middle
names?
- Nicknames?
Physical / Appearance
- Height?
- Weight?
- Build?
The seven questions listed above are standard.
I work my
characterization backwards.
1. .1 What
is my main character’s profession?
2 This
will determine a great deal of his/her physical, mental abilities, and
personality traits.
For example: branches of the military have requirements,
moving up in rank require additional skills.
·
A rodeo clowns’ skill set is different from a
bronc-rider, or a bull-rider.
·
Where as a spy and an under-cover cop may share
some of the same skill set, but the focus and the personality/ training would
be more selective.
·
A professional blogger and home-cook vs a food-critic
who’s travel-the-world and only dines at 5-star restaurants.
2.
How do they wear their clothes?
3. What
are their feet like? (type of shoes, state of shoes, socks, feet, pristine,
dirty, worn, etc)
4. Race
/ Ethnicity?
5. Mannerisms?
6. Are
they in good health? An athlete will
have had injuries.
7. Do
they have any secrets?
8. What
haunts them?
Personality (this is
something that pops into my head during the writing of the 1st
draft)
- Catchphrase?
- Bad habits?
- What
makes them laugh out loud?
- How
do they display affection?
- How
do they want to be seen by others? (this can be a secret)
- How
do they see themselves?
- Strongest
character trait?
- Weakest
character trait?
- How
do they react to praise?
- How
do they react to criticism? (this can be a trigger for a villain)
- What
is their greatest fear?
- What
will they stand up for? Willing to die for?
- Who
do they quote? (The Commissioner in the TV show, Blue Bloods quotes Teddy Roosevelt.)
Friends and Family
- Is
their family big or small? Who does it consist of?
- What
is their perception of family?
- Do
they have siblings? Older or younger?
- Describe
their best friend.
- Do
they have any pets?
- Who
are their natural allies?
- Who
are their surprising allies?
Past and Future
- What
was your character like as a baby? As a child? (This is something the
hero/heroine can wonder about or even ask.)
- Did
they grow up rich or poor?
- Did
they grow up nurtured or neglected?
- What
smells remind them of their childhood?
- Has
anyone ever saved their life?
- Strongest
childhood memory?
Conflict
- How do
they respond to a threat?
- Are
they most likely to fight with their fists or their tongue?
- What
is your character’s kryptonite?
- How do
they perceive strangers?
- What
is their choice of weapon? (the home-cook could serve a crispy and dry mac
and cheese casserole.)
- Where
do they go when they’re angry?
- Who
are their enemies and why?
Possessions
- What
is in their fridge:
- What
is in their purse or wallet?
- What
is in their pockets?
- What
is their most treasured possession?
Values
- What
do they think is the worst thing that can be done to a person?
- Did
they keep or break their last promise?
Miscellaneous
- What
would they do if they won the lottery?
- What
fairy-tale do they hate? Why?
- Do
they believe in happy endings?
- What
would they ask a fortune teller?
- If
they could have a superpower, what would they choose?
My questionnaire is just a little over 50 questions. However, the important answers pop into my
mind when I’m writing the first draft. Others
are answered when I’m working on a revision.
And as every writer knows, at some point during the writing process,
the characters take-over and a great deal of careful plotting gets tossed out
the window.
Along with the links to my novels, I’ve included a recipe
for a potato-side dish (remember the reference to the food-blogger/home cook?
This is a hot casserole for dinner, lunch, or
breakfast. I often make it for a potluck,
church social, or divide it into individual containers and freeze and reheat
for future meals.
8 ingredient/Gluten Free
9 X 14-inch casserole dish (bottom coated with oil/butter).
350-degree preheated oven
Potato Casserole
1 small onion, diced
1 bag 30 oz. frozen hash brown potatoes, thawed
1 can cream of chicken soup
½ tsp pepper
1 tsp salt
Dash of garlic powder (optional
1 stick of butter, melted
8 oz sharp cheddar cheese (1/2 of the cheese in the mixture)
1 cup sour cream
·
In a large bowl add ingredients one-by-one, folding
each into the mixture with a large spoon or spatula.
·
Pour n the melted butter and then add the cheese
and sour cream.
·
Toss into casserole dish, moving the mixture so
it is evenly distributed and touches the all sides of the dish.
Add the reminding cheese on top of the casserole. Since my family loves cheese, I was much more
generous with the cheese topping.
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Happy Reading,
Connie Vines
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