Metamorphe--under construction.
Every First Nation has bear legends and probably a majority have a Bear Clan too. Little wonder, as Bears were once common in the woodlands of North America. More than that, to the first people who walked onto and then across this continent carrying only spears and slings, the bear would have been a formidable animas.Tuesday, April 29, 2025
BEAR TALES
I am in the grandma zone, a long time writer and poet, posting at Crone Henge and BWL these days just because. Wish I could travel, and last year I was lucky enough to get back to the UK, specifically to Avebury to reconnect with the ancient temple. Hiking, camping, lover of solitude, cats, moons and gardens.
Monday, April 28, 2025
Sensory Details: The Magical Key to a Vivid and Emotional Reading Experience By Connie Vines
Sensory Details: The Magical Key to a Vivid and Emotional Reading Experience

Come for the fun...Stay for the romance.
A gentle breeze blew my hair across my cheek (TOUCH) as I walked along the uneven trail (TOUCH). Leaves rustled (SOUND) above me, and a lone crow gave several loud caws (SOUND) overhead. I took a deep breath. The smell of decay and leaves (SMELL) made me wary, and the coppery taste of fear coated my throat. I scanned my surroundings to ensure I wasn't being followed (SIGHT).
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Every writer knows that The Five Senses also sets the story's mood/tone/genre.
While my first example lets the reader know this story isn't a straightforward romance.
The reader will expect a murder mystery/suspense/or even a Gothic novel.
The second photo, a collage, evokes a romantic or light-hearted story with a holiday vibe.
Therefore, during a first draft, the focus is on the story's setting, time, and tone, which are vital. Dialogue and characterization are also essential.
I have discovered (in my reading and professional writing) that not including a wide range of sensory details is, in fact, cheating your reader.
Cheating? I would never cheat my readers!
πΉ Sensory details draw your reader into the story, trigger emotional responses, and, most importantly, make them feel a part of your story world.
Since I'm an introvert and tactile, adding these details/emotional reactions is natural to me. In contrast, a more analytical person's writing might focus on the visual and take a more detective approach to/reaction to the sensory clues.
Now, one step further: How your character processes his/her sensory details enriches the story. (Obviously, a hard-boiled detective's vocabulary would be different from that of a giddy teenager.)
π₯πΊExamples from Television and Movies:
This is for fans of Star Trek (original series: William Shatner, Leonard Nimoy, and Forest Kelly) and the Cinema movies that followed (Chris Pine, Zachary Quinto, Karl Urban).
Mr. Spock was my favorite character. Though I observe, analyze, and retain facts and can relate details decades later, I am not, and will never be, "Mr. Spock."
Captain Kirk was a physical, in-your-face kind of guy. He yelled, punched, and bled. First, on the scene or to make a scene, the man didn't seem to ever sleep.
Then there was "Bones," Doctor Leonard McCoy. He grumbles and points out injustice, holds his ground for what is right, and saves his patient's life. He has empathy, compassion, and wit.
So, the first key to successful sensory details in a story is to know your character. How does your character look at the world? What lens does your character use?
Does this sensory detail become vital to the story, or define your main character? Or the clue to solving a murder/mystery?
Excerpts from Gumbo Ya Ya (an anthology)
A Slice of Scandal
She ignored his question and continued with her narrative. "Instead, the scenes are shot according to where they are set. The cooking, naturally, will be here on the sound stage. But Harvey wants some location work, too."
Sebastian felt the hair on the back of his neck stand up. "Location work?" How would he investigate a murder and a smuggling ring if he wandered over to some tourist site? He flipped through the script. "My contract doesn't say anything about location work."
Julia glanced over her script, making eye contact. "You're joking, right?"
Think fast, Beaux, just stall her. "I'm not ready."
"You're not ready?" she asked, her voice heavy with disbelief. You've lived in a swamp, caught and eaten alligators, frogs, snakes, and fish... and you don't want to appear at a local shopping mall?"
"I'm not ready; you told me that. I still get nervous...in large crowds."
The look she shot in his direction clearly labeled him a liar, but she kept silent...
Love Potion No. 9
"Don't shake your finger at me, Simone Basso. I know what I'm doing." Persia Richmond said, holding a pipette to fill a crystal half-ounce atomizer with perfume. The top notes of peach blossoms, bergamot, and mid-notes of gardenia, honey, and tuberose tanalized. The tuberose, being the most carnal of the floral notes and high-ticket natural essence for her fragrance compound, merged with peony and orange blossom to temper the intoxication properties. The base notes lingered while a hint of something unnamed and mysterious beguiled and skimmed across the narrow processing room, saturating her senses.
The fragrance was New Orleans, culture at its most upscale moments, and Mardi Gras at its naughtiest.
The imported essence oils of the tuberose had nearly emptied her bank account, leaving Persia only one egret. Her Grandpapa hadn't lived to experience her mastery of perfumery.
Holding up the bottle, she allowed the light to shine through the tempered vial for a moment before she ensured the stopper was tight.
Simone leaned over Persia's shoulder, "I done warned and warned you about messing with love potions."
The statement sent Persia's heart thundering in her chest. Snagging a steadying breath, she regained her composure. "You worry too much, Simone. This is a perfume. Nothing more, nothing less."
Now, back to me π
And the scent of my favorite fragrance?
A creamy, sweet-fruity fragrance starts with dahlia, then fades into pear.
Notes: Velvet, Dahila Petals, Crisp Pear, Praline Musk, and whipped Tonka Bean.
I hope you've enjoyed this month's post :)
Happy Reading!
Connie
Books are available via online book sellers:
https://bwlpublishing.ca/vines-connie/
https://www.amazon.com/Connie-Vines/e/B004C7W6PE
https://www.barnesandnoble.com/w/brede-connie-vines/1115934010
https://books.apple.com/us/author/connie-vines/id624802082
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Sunday, April 27, 2025
AI – Where is the intelligence? – by Vijaya Schartz
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Saturday, April 26, 2025
Paying Dues by Bruce McKern
Thursday, April 24, 2025
Vikings in North America by Joan Donaldson-Yarmey
The Vikings in North America
It has been long thought that the first European to
step on the soil of North America was Christopher Columbus. But excavations
done at a site in northwest Newfoundland, called L’Anse aux Meadows, in the
1960’s recovered artifacts like jewellery, a stone oil lamp, a bone knitting
needle, and tools that were compared to ones used at Viking settlements in
Greenland and Iceland around the year 1000. They have been carbon dated to
between the years 990 and 1050, proof that the Vikings were in North America
long before Columbus.
Vikings
were people from Scandinavia, present day Norway, Denmark, and Sweden, who were
merchants as well as warriors. During the late eighth to eleventh century they
raided, pillage, and conquered settlements in Scotland and throughout Europe.
They also had settlements in Iceland and Greenland.
Surnames ending in "-son" or
"-sen" are considered to have Viking ancestry. My great-grandparents emigrated from Scotland. Plus,
the little finger on my right hand does not lay flat when I set my palm down.
My sister has the same condition but worse. Her little finger had a permanent
bend to it. She went to her doctor and received a botox shot to relax it. When
she went for physio she was told that a bent finger like that was a sign of
being a Viking. I also have a friend of Norwegian ancestry with the same little
finger.
But, that
bent little finger comes from my mother’s side who also had one. Her maiden
name was Relf, which I learned was first found in the 1000s in Nairnit, a town in northern
Scotland. So, with this
ancestry on both sides I consider myself a Viking. In 2017, I visited L’Anse
aux Meadows in northwest Newfloundland.
From the parking lot I walked to the
interpretive centre where I looked at the displays of what the settlement would
have looked like during its occupation. There are replicas of the longships
that the Vikings sailed in, artifacts unearthed during the excavations,
write-ups about the Vikings, tools that were found, and maps showing the route
the Vikings used to get to Newfoundland or Vinland, as they are thought to have
named it. The Scandinavians of the medieval period were known as Norse and they
were farmers and traders. When they began raiding other countries they became
known as Vikings, the Norse word for raiders.
There has
been a lot of interest in the Vikings recently with televisions shows and
documentaries about them and their raiding which began in the 790s and lasted
until around 1050. With their longboats and advanced sailing and navigational
skills the Viking men and women travelled from Scandinavia south through Europe
to Africa, the Middle East, and Asia and west to North America.
I left
the centre and followed a long, wooden boardwalk through grass and small bushes
to the actual site. There I found a post fence around a yard with large mounds
covered in grass. When the Vikings landed here there were forests from which
they were able to get material for their boat and house building. The remains
of eight buildings were found in the 1960s and they are believed to have been
made of a wooden frame and covered with sod.
The
structures have been identified are a long house, an iron smithy, a carpentry
shop, and smaller buildings that may have been for lower-status crewmembers or
even slaves or for storage. There are three replicas of those sod buildings
with their thick walls on the site. One is a long house which is equipped with
clothes, beds and bedding, household utensils, tools, a fire pit and has a
couple dressed in period clothing cooking a meal. The Vikings hunted caribou,
bear, and smaller animals plus whale, walrus, and birds for food as well as
fished.
I
wandered through the rooms divided by hand carved wooden plank walls. Light
came from the fire and holes in the ceiling which are partially covered with
upside down wooden boxes to keep the rain out.
One of
the other buildings is the smithy complete with anvil, forge, bellows, and
various tools. I wandered the rest of the site and saw the outlines of other
buildings that have not been reconstructed. It is estimated that between 30 and
160 people lived there over the years.
The
Vikings arrived in Newfoundland from Iceland via Greenland. According to
historical records the site was inhabited by the brothers and sister of Leif
Ericson plus a series of explorers. It is believed the settlement was there for
seven or eight years before being abandoned. This is the only confirmed Viking
site in North America and is the farthest west that Europeans sailed before
Columbus.
After
viewing the buildings I followed a trail along the rocky shoreline and then
turned inland to walk on a boardwalk over a bog back to the parking lot.
One of
the best things is that not only does the interpretive centre have the history
of the Vikings, but there is also extensive displays showing the history of the
aboriginal people who inhabited the area over thousands of years before any
European arrived.
In 2018, I visited the Viking Ship Museum in Roskilde, just outside Copenhagen, Denmark. In the museum is a permanent exhibition of parts of five original Viking ships excavated nearby in 1962. A thousand years ago these ships were deliberately scuttled (filled with rocks and sunk) in a river to stop the enemy from invading the city by water. Over the decades since they were found, the pieces have been preserved and put together on a metal frame to show how the ships would have looked. Also at the site are replicas of the Viking ships and I became a Viking for an hour. A group of us sat on the seats and rowed the ship out of the harbour using the long oars. Once on the open water we hoisted the mast and set sail. After sailing for a while we headed back to the harbour. As we neared it I had the honour of pulling on the rope that lowered the mast and sail and we glided back to our dock.
It would
be fun, someday, to write a novel about my ancestors.
I was born in New Westminster B.C. and raised in Edmonton.I have worked as a bartender, cashier, bank teller, bookkkeeper, printing press operator, meat wrapper, gold prospector, house renovator, and nursing attendant. I have had numerous travel and historical articles published and wrote seven travel books on Alberta, B.C. and the Yukon and Alaska that were published through Lone Pine Publishing in Edmonton.
One of my favourite pasttimes is reading especially mystery novels and I have now turned my writing skills to fiction. However, I have not ventured far from my writing roots. The main character in my Travelling Detective Series is a travel writer who somehow manages to get drawn into solving mysteries while she is researching her articles for travel magazines. This way, the reader is able to take the book on holidays and solve a mystery at the same time.
Illegally Dead is the first novel of the series and The Only Shadow In The House is the second. The third Whistler's Murder came out in August 2011 as an e-book through Books We Love. It can be purchased as an e-book and a paperback through Amazon.
i live on a small acreage in the Alberni Valley on Vancouver Island.
Wednesday, April 23, 2025
Where to Set Your Story by Victoria Chatham
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| TO BE RELEASED SEPTEMBER 2025 |
All stories have a setting. Some are instantly recognisable, others are not. One of my favourite authors is Rosamund Pilcher, who set many of her stories in Cornwall, the English county that dips its toe into the Atlantic Ocean. The first line of her book, Coming Home, tells you this, but in a charming way:
'The Porthkerris Council School stood halfway up the steep hill which climbed from the heart of the little town to the empty moors which lay beyond.'
Lee Child, another of my favourite authors, leaves you in no doubt of his setting in the opening of Oneshot:
'Friday. Five o'clock in the afternoon. Maybe the hardest time to move unobserved through a city. Or maybe the easiest. Because at five o'clock on a Friday nobody pays attention to anything. Except the road ahead.'
The setting anchors the story in time and space, providing a sense of reality for the reader. The author is responsible for further solidifying that setting by engaging the senses. If it is an indoor setting, such as a house or a building, where is the character located? What furniture might they have to move around? What can they see, hear, and feel? I often close my eyes and visualise it, typically typing as I move from hallway to stairs, from scullery to dining room. The devil is in the details, so all the details I ‘see’ are typed. What time of day is it, and what part of the year? Where does the light fall, and what shadows does it create? How does that affect the colour palette of the dΓ©cor? Being specific usually holds a reader’s attention, especially if it appeals to the senses.
Shakespeare wrote, ‘Let me count the ways.’ OK, he was writing Sonnet #43, but that phrase could just as easily refer to creating settings as to declaring love. In As You Like It, he also wrote, ‘All the world’s a stage and all the men and women merely players.’
While the Bard waxes poetic, authors are not so different in creating the stage or setting and moving characters around in that landscape. As much as I love creating characters, I also enjoy creating their settings. For my Regency romances, my characters have followed the social round from someone’s country seat to London, then on to the spa towns of Brighton, Bath, Cheltenham, Buxton, and Harrogate. While there were others, these are the most easily recognised, particularly Bath, for those who enjoy Regency romance. Being such popular cities, many of which have changed little since their inception, street plans are readily available online with some digging into each city’s archives.![]() |
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I have been torn between using real-life locations for my contemporary stories and creating a town because I’m writing fiction. This is where I combine fact and fiction. I take a location I know and fictionalise it. That way, I can still write with a measure of conviction that might otherwise be lacking. Readers invariably sense a weakness, and I do my best to make my fictional settings as real as possible. I mix up English village names if my setting is in England, and I’m sure there are many more fictional ranches in Southern Alberta than in reality.
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| Fall colours in Southern Alberta |
Another aspect of setting is designing the houses in which my characters live. I need to understand how they move through these spaces and what keeps the upstairs household members separate from those below stairs. Even with my ranch houses, I approach the same considerations. After designing one ranch house, I knew almost every log and stone in its construction, but I could not picture the roofline. I phoned a local architect’s office, explained my dilemma to the receptionist, and asked if any of the architects there would be willing to assist. The following day, I received a call from a gentleman intrigued by the process of building a house in a novel. We scheduled an appointment, and when he examined my floor plan, it didn't take him long to add a roof to it. Job done, but our conversation about the intricacies of writing a book continued well beyond the one-hour slot he had allocated me.
My current work in progress is set in a place I know well, but I have fictionalized it out of respect for the residents. Whether they recognise it or not remains to be seen when A Murder in the Meadow debuts this coming September.
Victoria Chatham
Tuesday, April 22, 2025
Lighting the creative fire and keeping it burning
At a recent writer's workshop, one of my students asked, "How do you stay motivated to work on a book that may take years to complete?" My first thought was to pass on the old adage, "Don't be overwhelmed by the elephant laying before you. Eat it one bite at a time." I sensed the student needed something more immediate.
I said each book has a series of milestones. While it's immensely satisfying to see your name on the cover of your first book, that's only a single milestone along a long path of writing. I sensed he needed something immediate, so I passed on advice I'd received from Nevada Barr, the author of the Anna Pigeon series. She writes three pages a day. Every day. If she's inspired, she writes very small. If uninspired, she writes large and double spaced. That discipline yields a book every year.
I could see my student glaze over as he considered the prospect of a year of daily writing. I said, "the milestone was three pages, not the whole book. Write three pages and step back. Say, 'I've succeeded today. I've written three pages!"
Still not sensing any enthusiasm, I reassured him. "Do you have an opening sentence? If you do, you've passed a milestone. Is there an opening paragraph? Great, another milestone is behind you. A first page. Another success." I could see him starting to feel better about his accomplishments.
"Next, tell your wife or call you best friend when you've finished the first chapter. They'll be impressed and their enthusiasm will drive you on. You'll have the energy to write the second chapter."
As he mulled that advice, he smiled. "I can write three pages a day. Thank you."
A second student told me she'd stalled. Halfway through a book, she'd hit the wall. She was a "pantser', writing by the seat of her pants, whatever thoughts came to her mind that day. I suggested she step back to create an outline of the plot she's completed. When I do that, I perceive the "trajectory" of the book I'm writing, which helps me envision what comes next.
As the students left, a smiling middle-aged woman approached and shook my hand. I asked if I'd provided the tools she needed to move ahead with her book. Her reply was priceless. "No, Dean, what you've done is convince me I don't want to write a book. You've pointed out the things I enjoy in a book, and I'm motivated to dive into my "to be read" pile. I'll look at the plots and characters more critically. Thank you."
I heard later that she was working her way through my Pine County mystery series. That's a milestone for me; a reader who enjoyed the first Dean Hovey book she read, and is now moving on to the others.
If you're an inspired reader, check out "Skidded and Skunked". It's the latest book in the Pine County series. This is the first book for my co-author, D.L. Dixen, She's just hit that incredibly exciting milestone of touching the first book with her name printed on the cover.
Better yet, if you search for D.L. Dixen on Amazon or my publisher's website, you'll see "Skidded and Skunked." Not only did she make the book better, she hit that BIG milestone of her name on the book's cover.
https://www.amazon.com/s?k=D.L.+Dixen&crid=2GBIPB966OLU5
Monday, April 21, 2025
A woman doctor in the 18th century, impossible, or is it? by Diane Scott Lewis
“That’s what I’ve come to discuss with you.” Rose scanned two other book titles then faced him. “Since I was a little girl I’ve been interested in healing, practicing on cats and dogs, mostly. I set a dog’s leg, and he recovered quite well. I even treated our servants in America with poultices and syrups.
“I discovered a Lucretia Lester of Long Island who practiced midwifery for years, but she was respected as a nurse and doctoress to the women she treated.” Rose sat in a Windsor chair before a large oak desk, the books in her lap.
“Women have long been respected as midwives.” Nelson sat at his desk. The size of the piece dwarfed him, and it displayed no personal items and no portraits hung on the walls.
He stared down at his hand and tapped a finger. “Of course, since the use of forceps started twenty years ago, which brought men into delivery rooms, midwives were relegated to rural communities or serving the poor.” He related this as if delivering a lecture. His stiff words pushed aside any friendliness.
Undaunted, Rose plunged on. “I also read an article in an old edition of the South Carolina Gazette about a Mrs. Grant who attended lectures by professors of Anatomy and Practice of Physick in Edinburgh. She had a certificate and practiced as a doctoress in Scotland.”
“I have heard of her. That was almost thirty years ago.” Nelson looked up again, his frown deep. “What do you hope to accomplish, Miss Gwynn?”
“Women were allowed to be physicians in England until Henry VIII legislated to put a stop to it.” She pressed the history books against her thighs. “It’s time that women were allowed back into the practice.”
Sunday, April 20, 2025
An Invisible Multicultural Age Gap…by Sheila Claydon
https://bookswelove.net/claydon-sheila/
Hello from Singapore,
I’m writing this on a very old iPad that is refusing to post any photos so you’ll just have to take my word for it that life is very different here. It’s so hot and humid that the most energetic activities take place before nine in the morning or after five in the afternoon. In between those times the best place to be is in one of the many air conditioned malls with their myriad coffee shops and restaurants, or in a pool in the shade. Despite the heat, it is an amazing place with a very chequered and interesting history. Its parks are pristine, its roads shaded by trees and bordered by luxuriant well tended foliage, and everything works. Trains and buses arrive on time, taxis are prompt, supermarkets are stocked with more things than you’ll ever need, and the museums, art galleries and other tourist attractions are numerous, interesting and immaculately organised. The best part of this extended holiday visiting family, however, has been our trip to Indonesia.
Although only 45 minutes away by ferry it really is a different country. Green of course and with a wonderful coastline and the clearest sea I’ve ever seen and the warmest one I’ve ever swum in. And its people are so welcoming, which is what I’m coming to. As I explained in my previous post, this trip was all about celebrating my birthday, the special one that comes along once every decade. We stayed in a truly multicultural complex where, unbeknownst to me, my son, knew the tennis coach.The result was an amazing unexpected birthday party complete with wine, candle and cake. What made it even more memorable were the people the coach brought with him. All young and yet happy to spend an evening with someone from a much older generation. He also brought his girlfriend to the party, a stunning trapeze artist from Japan. I had seen her perform so knew she was talented. That she was also beautiful, kind and very interesting as well as being one of the nicest people I have ever met made the vast age gap between us disappear in an instant. I wish we could have spent more than one evening together.
Meeting strangers who quickly become friends, yet knowing you will probably never see them again, is the upside and downside of travelling, but there are always the memories. And having my birthday celebrated by a mix of mainly young people from Indonesia, Singapore, Thailand, Vietnam, Korea, Japan, China, Australia, South Africa, Holland,France and the UK is one of the very special ones.
Sorry about the photos!
Friday, April 18, 2025
Rainforest Writers Retreat ~ A Little bit of Heaven
Thursday, April 17, 2025
April - Is it Spring yet by Janet Lane Walters #BWLAuthor #MFRWAuthor #April #Spring
When I was outside today, the wind was so gusty, I thought we had been blown back to March. I don't know if anyone else feels that winter has lasted long enough. At least it's not snowing again.
Spring is one of my favorite times. At least the daffodils are blooming but not in my yard. My flowers are mainly roses and peonies. The peonies have breeched the ground and soon will be larger and perhaps bloom. My dogwood has finally begun to leaf and can't wait until the tree looks white with flowers.
I would take pictures but looking at shoots isn't colorful and the roses are a month or more from blooming. Last summer wasn't great for them since it was so dry. Butt enough complaining. Spring will arrive in it's time.
I'm finally on the last draft of the book that seems to have taken forever with a few spells of bad health to halt the progress. The horror writer ahs demised and the case is almost solved. My next book will be a romance triggered by a phone call from an old friend who called after about 20 years. This may also trigger some other romances featuring a phone call. I'll have to wait until they pop into my head.
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