Friday, January 6, 2023
Sleep Over at the Library, Anyone? by Eileen O'Finlan
Eileen O’Finlan was a member of the Worcester Writers Workshop for many years and now hosts a writing group at her home in Holden.
Kelegeen, published by BWL Publishing, is her debut novel. She is currently working on the sequel to be titled Erin's Children set in Worcester, Massachusetts.
Eileen is a holds a Bachelor’s Degree in history and a Master’s Degree in pastoral ministry.
When not writing or working her full-time job, Eileen facilitates online courses for the University of Dayton, Ohio.
My experiences living on a converted liveaboard boat inspired the first chapter in The Immoral by Jay Lang
The Immoral
Jay Lang
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My
inspiration for this chapter came from my years living on my boat, a converted
liveaboard that I moored in Deep Cove, B.C. For the four and a half years I
called the boat my home, I saw more natural beauty in the magic of nature than
I ever saw while living on land. I really wanted to let readers see what I had.
I found it very comforting to go back into my memories and create the setting
to this chapter.
Chapter One
The sound was intentional,
unmistakable. I am not alone. I slowly rise from the narrow cot and tiptoe
through the small cabin, overwhelmed with the feeling of impending doom. With
each doorway I pass, my breathing stops and my heart pounds as I anticipate
someone lunging from the darkness. A sliver of light from the crescent moon
casts a dusty blue glow through the grimy windows and illuminates the front
door—freedom. Carefully, I glide forward. I’m almost there. Heart pounding and
legs weak, I reach out and touch the small round doorknob. I’ve made it. Then,
the floor creaks from behind and a wave of terror rushes over me. My back
tightens and I freeze, as though a cold hand has clutched the back of my neck.
Terrified, I turn to face my fate.
* * *
Semi-conscious, I open my eyes and
take a deep breath. The air is thick with ozone. I roll onto my side and look
out the window. Angry clouds churn above the small cove. Electricity fills the
pilothouse and the hair on my arm stands on end. Instinctively, I grab my phone
from the pillow and check for any texts. Nothing from Kara. I get out of bed, struggling
to keep my balance as the boat rocks. The wind whipping across the bay
generates swells that slap hard against the hull as I walk out onto the stern
to check the ropes and set down extra buoys between the dock and the boat. Hard
sprays of sea water sting my face as gusts of wind push against me. 4 Back
inside, I wipe my wet face on my sleeve and sit at the settee to catch my
breath. I glance at the clock and see that it’s 4 AM. Considering the storm
that’s brewing, there’s no way I’m going to get back to sleep.
Since I have to be up at 5:30 for
work, I decide to gather my things and drive to the 24-hour café in the
village, where I’ll hang out until my shift starts. I work as an emergency
dispatcher for the local police station. After thirty-seven calls and a
half-pot of coffee, all before lunch, I’m running on pure adrenaline and
caffeine. I can’t wait for the day to be over when I can climb onto my boat and
into my bed. About an hour before my shift ends, a call comes in from a woman,
requesting to speak with an officer. She sounds panicked. I ask her what the
nature of her complaint is. The woman tells me her teenage daughter, Molly, has
been missing for four days. She says she wasn’t worried until she went into
Molly’s laptop and found a conversation between her and an older man.
I was inspired to write about Molly
after learning about the overwhelming number of girls that are lured away from
the safety of their homes by online predators.
I quickly put her call through to an available
officer. A nauseous feeling forms in the pit of my stomach. I’ve only been
working at the police station for a year and although I never deal with the
people face-to-face, some of the calls stay with me long after my shift ends.
After I’ve signed out, I’m making my way to my locker when I hear my boss
calling my name.
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Thursday, January 5, 2023
The Cinderella Princess. Anne Stuart Future Queen of England Part One by Rosemary Morris
At heart I am a historian. Before I
begin writing a #classi#historical#omance I research the background. I hope you
will enjoy this month’s insider blog based on my notes.
When Anne, Stuart was born on the 6th
February1665 neither her uncle, the second King Charles, nor her father, James,
heir to the throne, imagined she would become Queen. The king’s seven
illegitimate children proved his virility. There was every reason to believe he
and his queen Henrietta Maria who he married three years ago, would not have
legitimate heirs If they did not, James and Anne, the Duke and Duchess of York’s
son would succeed. Unfortunately, he only lived for six months.
Infant mortality was high. Fortunately, Anne
and her older sister, Mary, survived the Great Plague, which broke out in the
year of the Cinderella’s birth. The little princesses grew up in their nursery
but their brother James, a younger brother and two little sisters died. One can
imagine the effects of these deaths on a small girl suffering from poor health,
whose weak eyes watered constantly.
With the consent of Anne’s uncle, the king,
her parents sent the four-year-old to her grandmother, widow of the executed
first Charles, who now lived in France, to have her eyes treated.
A portrait of the Anne as a small girl
painted by an unknown artist at the French Court depicts a plump, adorable little
girl, dressed in brocade and playing with a King Charles spaniel. Yet her eyes,
set in an oval face with a mouth shaped in a perfect cupid’s bow, are wary.
* * *
Rosemary Morris’ #classic#historical#romance novels set in Queen Anne
Stuart’s reign – 1702 -1714
Far Beyond Rubies.
Tangled Love
The Captain and The Countess
The Viscount and The Orphan
With firmly closed bedroom doors, the reader can
relish the details of emerging romances.
* * *
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To
read the first three chapters please visit my website. www.rosemarymorris.co.uk
Wednesday, January 4, 2023
To Curmudgeons by Julie Christen
Here's to all the curmudgeons in my life, including the one you will meet in Nokota Voices coming in April.
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To Curmudgeons by Julie Christen
I know a man who’s not what he seems.
On the outside, in fact, he looks downright mean.
His brow is all crinkled in the shape of a V.
His mouth is a grimace. He sure acts cranky.
Hands crammed in his pockets or crossed over his chest.
Stand-offish. Skeptical. Unimpressed.
Mad at the world? Just mad at you?
Mad about change and politics too.
A crabby old man, just mean to the bone.
Wishing that we would all leave him alone.
But …
Hidden in shadowy depths unseen
Lie stories of pain and places he’s been.
He loves with his whole heart. Mourns those he’s lost.
He’ll fight to the death for you - damn the cost.
His hands are gnarled, tender and strong
To pray, caress and work all day long.
Wisdom courses through his veins.
So much knowledge. Zero fame.
He’s been there, done that. Got the t-shirt and then some.
He’s a man with a story, not just a curmudgeon.
So next time you see him, maybe give him a chance
To prove he’s much more than you see at first glance.
I live in central Minnesota and have all my life. I have taught 8th grade English plus 6th and 8th grade health in the same room in the same district for 30 years. Some say I have “staying power”. I am fiercely dedicated to the things in life that make my heart happy – books books books, my family, my animals, and my writing. My husband and I ride a Harley and our horses when we’re not working on some part of our hobby farm. I have way too many hobbies, but they bring me joy and, I think, help keep me young.
Monday, January 2, 2023
Editing essentials by donalee Moulton
Editing essentials
Revising,
reworking, revitalizing
Great writers don’t need an editor. They demand one. What first-rate writers understand is that another pair of eyes or a fresh pair of eyes are essential to successful communication. This second looks brings a new perspective, the distance that only time (even a little time) can offer, and renewed energy to improve content.
Let’s try this exercise. You’ll need a piece of paper, 8.5” x 11” if possible. Now transform that flat piece of paper into the world’s most wonderful flying machine. The goal is to fly as far as possible. Take a few minutes to play with different designs, then stand up and launch your creation. How far did it go?
Now let’s rethink, or edit, the exercise. What did your flying machine look like? Something similar to a paper airplane?
Let’s review the instructions, the language. Nowhere did it say to build a paper airplane. It said a flying machine. The goal was distance. What would be an easier way to build a flying machine? What would get us great distance?
Crumpling the paper into a ball would.
That’s what editing does. As we write, whether for a reader or a listener, we dive in. Ideas flow. We create content. We think about our audience. We identify important points to make. We’re in the midst of our content, our characters, and our creativity.
When we edit, we take a step back. We come up for air. We have a different perspective – and a draft on which to overlay a fresh set of eyes. Even short pieces of writing should be edited. We need to think before we walk away. We need to give ourselves time to review and revise. To take one last read through (or think through). You’ll be surprised at what you missed or decide to revise.
Editing is essential to clear, concise, compelling writing. But editing isn’t just one thing. Just as pizza isn’t just one thing. There is deep dish pizza with red carnival spinach. Thin crust pepperoni and Bloomsdale spinach. New York-style pizza with Tyee spinach. Notice though that although the type of pizza is different there are common elements.
That’s also true when it comes to editing. There are three broad types: substantive editing, stylistic editing, and copyediting.
I thought we could spend a little time exploring these different types of editing in future blogs. Until then, I’d love to hear from you about your editing process, what drives you nuts, what makes your heart sing.
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